Peer & User Feedback
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User: Fortunately I have a family member who works with my target audience allowing me to gain vital feedback. The initial reaction was positive to the overall aesthetic, the students highlighted that they particularly liked Bramble, the bee character. One of the key areas to improve was mainly focused on text size. Certain areas of text could be increased or made bold for more clarity.
Peer: My feedback from peer assessment was very beneficial to me when refining my final pages. My peers thought that my character was strong and was appropriate for the brief. They suggested that I increase the size of the font on certain pages and also make key titles bold. It was also mentioned that more space needed to be allowed between text and the edge of the text boxes. When the children write within the boxes they require more space, this is something I will focus on improving.
User: Fortunately I have a family member who works with my target audience allowing me to gain vital feedback. The initial reaction was positive to the overall aesthetic, the students highlighted that they particularly liked Bramble, the bee character. One of the key areas to improve was mainly focused on text size. Certain areas of text could be increased or made bold for more clarity.
Peer: My feedback from peer assessment was very beneficial to me when refining my final pages. My peers thought that my character was strong and was appropriate for the brief. They suggested that I increase the size of the font on certain pages and also make key titles bold. It was also mentioned that more space needed to be allowed between text and the edge of the text boxes. When the children write within the boxes they require more space, this is something I will focus on improving.
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